Relections on the Intro

Gahhh. I hate ripping apart my own work, but I feel I need to if I'm going to improve.

This was one of the first sections of the manuscript I wrote. To tell you the truth, I tried to make it exciting but with 10 year older eyes I think it's pretty weak on a writing technical point of view. This is what happens when you think you are more clever than you really are.

Fuck.